This is a good start Lady Banner, I would have liked some visuals as Film is a VISUAL medium! Do these characters have names? How old are they? When and where is it set? Some more details required but an intriguing start.
This is a good start Lady Banner, I would have liked some visuals as Film is a VISUAL medium! Do these characters have names? How old are they? When and where is it set? Some more details required but an intriguing start.
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